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works007

works007

works007

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<P>The traffic rule is very important in our daily life.
   About the opinion on the traffic rule,I propose several viewpoints following
:The passerby should walk on the pavement. We can't drive too fast.The bike can't go
on the flexible. At the gate of school, the car or the bus should go slowly.We
should park it in the correct place.We should  overtake from the left side.We can'
t drive the car after drinked the alcohol,it is very dangerous!Most important i
n my opinion:We should look at the traffic light,when it is red,we should st
ops;when it is green,we can go.
   If you observe the traffic rule ,you will avoid some unnecessary injury</P>
<P>I have already try my best. Don't jest me.
</P>[em04]

[此贴子已经被作者于2004-12-10 12:01:10编辑过]