my resume(helping me perfect it)

iwts

<P ><FONT face="Times New Roman">My name is LinJing ,  I am born in shanxin province..  I graduated from JiLin university with a degree in mechanical engineering in 2003.I have worked in ZheJiang AuGu AUTO ACCESSORY CO.,ltd. since graduated.  My work is drawing in the first half year. And then the boss asked me to run equipment because it had had no persons to administrate equipment .from then I have done this work..</FONT></P>
<P ><FONT face="Times New Roman">  My company equipments are numerical control lathes mostly.  I can settled some troubles of lathes through practice and communicate with different persons. </FONT></P> The only reason why I am leaving the present firm is I want an object to better myself

iwts

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happybird3

<P>I can't catch this sentence:</P>
<P>"<FONT face="Times New Roman">I can settled some troubles of …</FONT>"</P>

廊田

<FONT face="Times New Roman">you could change this sentence I have worked in ZheJiang AuGu AUTO ACCESSORY CO.,ltd. to I have been working.......the sentence below "And then the boss asked me to run equipment because it had had no persons to administrate equipment .from then I have done this work.." You can use "after ,i work as .....and I have much.....experences in ....I think don't use the boss ask you ,because you are an positive man </FONT>

mess17

<P>I agree with 4th floor.</P>
<P>In the resume,you must show that you are active.</P>
<P>You will try your best to work ,not asked to do something!</P>
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廊田

<P><FONT size=4>mess17,what do you do ?how long do you work?</FONT></P>
<P><FONT size=4>i graduated in 2004,nowadays,i do the job -mould design</FONT></P>
<P><FONT size=4>as a technonical worker ,i think i will not do the job all life,</FONT></P>
<P><FONT size=4>i will change my job in the future ,but i don't know what to do now,</FONT></P>
<P><FONT size=4>maybe i will join the commecial field.of course ,it is likely that </FONT></P>
<P><FONT size=4>the future job is related to my major .</FONT></P>

ghe0

<P>honestly speaking ,I don't think it is a good resume ,for in a resume you shouldn't use so many "i".</P>

ghe0

you could do better ,try again !